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IELTS Writing Task 1 - Simon's 4-Paragraph Method

Will Lei
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🎯 The Core Concept
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Task 1 is a factual report, not an essay. No opinions. No conclusion. Just describe what you see.
(Source: IELTS Simon Writing Video Course Lesson 1 What is Writing Task 1 Academic?)

Tip

小作文是數據報告,不是議論文。不寫個人觀點,不寫結論段,只描述圖表事實。


🧱 The 4-Paragraph & 9-Sentence Structure (四段結構)
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An easy ‘method’ for you, so you know what to write:

ParagraphWhat?SentenceHow?
1. IntroductionParaphrase the question1用近義詞/轉句式
2. Overview2 main trends / key features2全篇最重要,找出特徵,不寫數字
3. Detail 1Specific numbers + comparisons3選一組數據,具體描述,合理分類
4. Detail 2Specific numbers + comparisons3選另一組數據,具體描述,合理分類

📊 Question Types
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西蒙將小作文分成六類,前四種共用同一套「數字語言」:

#TypeFocus
1Line GraphChanges + trends 變化與趨勢
2Bar ChartHighest/lowest + trends 最高/最低值 + 趨勢
3Pie ChartProportion + trends 比例與趨勢
4TableHighest/lowest + trends 最高/最低值 + 趨勢
5Process DiagramSteps + passive voice + purpose 步驟 + 被動語態 + 目的
6MapChanges (before/after) 變化(前後)
💡 核心技巧:前四種圖表(線、柱、餅、表)都使用相同的三項基本功——描述數字、比較數字、描述趨勢

🔑 Skills / What to Do
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Do these three things no matter the question type:

1️⃣ Describe a Specific Number (描述具體數字)
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  • ... reached a peak of 45,000 units in March.
  • ... accounted for just under a third of total expenditure.
  • ... stood at approximately 2.5 million, the highest among all regions.

2️⃣ Compare Multiple Numbers (比較多個數字)
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找出最大值、最小值、相似值或排序。

  • ... overtook ... as the best-selling brand in 2024.
  • ... was by far the largest sector, while ... represented the smallest share.
  • ... showed a similar figure to ..., both hovering around 15%.

3️⃣ Describe Trends / Changes (描述趨勢變化)#

描述數據隨時間嘅上升、下降、波動或平穩。

  • ... rose steadily before levelling off in the final quarter.
  • The proportion of ... more than doubled over the decade.
  • ... fluctuated slightly between 2018 and 2022, then dropped sharply.

🚫 What NOT to Do
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❌ Wrong✅ CorrectWhat is your task?
寫個人觀點 (“I think…”)只寫事實描述小作文不是議論文
寫結論段 (“In conclusion…”)寫概述段 (“Overall…”)小作文不需要結論
逐條羅列所有數字選代表性數據 + 比較不要變成「流水帳」
分開描述每個項目將相關數據擺埋一齊比較比較是「關鍵」

💡 Key Takeaway
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Paraphrase the question → Spot 2 main trends → Group data into 2 logical paragraphs. No opinions. No conclusion.

改寫題目 → 抓出兩大趨勢 → 數據分兩組描述;不寫觀點,不寫結論。